Showing posts with label Butterfly Swords. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Butterfly Swords. Show all posts

18 October 2010

BUTTERFLY SWORDS Winner!

We have a winner for Jeannie Lin's BUTTERFLY SWORDS guest blog. A free copy goes to:

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Contact Carrie to provide your mailing address. The book must be claimed by next Sunday or another winner will be drawn. Please stop back later to let us know what you thought! Congratulations!

10 October 2010

Guest Author: Jeannie Lin

This week our guest author is contributor Jeannie Lin as she celebrates the release of her debut, BUTTERFLY SWORDS, which is available now. BUTTERFLY SWORDS promises to take Harlequin Historical readers where they've never gone before: to 8th century China!

"If Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon merged with A Knight's Tale, you'd have the power and romance of Lin's dynamic debut. The action never stops, the love story is strong and the historical backdrop is fascinating." ★★★★ RT Book Reviews

"Jeannie Lin will take you on a trip to China you will not forget." ~ Book Lovers, Inc.

Journey to the very edge of honor, loyalty...and love.

During China's infamous Tang Dynasty, a time awash with luxury, yet littered with deadly intrigues and fallen royalty, betrayed Princess Ai Li flees before her wedding. Miles from home, with only her delicate butterfly swords for a defense, she enlists the reluctant protection of a blue-eyed warrior...

Battle-scarred, embittered Ryam has always held his own life at cheap value. Ai Li's innocent trust in him and honorable, stubborn nature make him desperate to protect her--which means not seducing the first woman he has ever truly wanted....
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How did you market an Asian story, location and character to mainstream publishing?

Editors and agents kept on saying that ultimately, the one thing that sells any book is the writing. I paid careful attention to developing craft and spent a lot of time figuring out how to write an opening that would market the book.

Other than that, I think you have to stand strong on what you're doing and why. In my head, I saw BUTTERFLY SWORDS as having great crossover potential. When querying, I conveyed the standout elements and tried to give a clear picture of the story. I positioned it as a historical romance to commit to a genre, though I knew there were historical fantasy elements in the book.

Why butterfly swords? Why not some other type of blade?

The moment I dreamt up Ai Li, I imagined the two swords in her hands. The two ideas came together, along with the title, and everything clicked into place.

I chose them because they're the only swords I've ever received any training on so I had some idea of how to use them. The double swords really are great weapons for a woman. They're lightweight and maneuverable. Pitting the more fluid and soft butterfly swords against the harder broadsword techniques that the hero uses seemed like a perfect match.

Tell us a little-known fact about Ryam. About Ai Li.

Ryam was inspired in part by Inigo Montoya from The Princess Bride. Ryam's father is a swordmaster who drank his life away and got killed in a stupid brawl. Ai Li was inspired in part by Lady Sun of the Three Kingdoms period, who had five brothers and always carried a sword around with her.

Which scene did you rewrite most?

The first fight scene between Ai Li and Ryam was the one I nitpicked the most. I had to work and rework the lead up for pacing and tension. I made a bunch of tweaks and passes for flow during the choreography of the fight. I believe that you should write an action scene and then go in and hack away a third of it, non-negotiable.

I experimented with both POVs, trying to decide who was the best narrator for the fight. I also went in and edited for sexual tension. This scene was how I wanted them to communicate with each other for the first time. Ryam had already helped Ai Li out, so she was indebted to him, but this "first touch" was so important for establishing why she would trust him and ultimately, be attracted to him.

How many people have you killed? What weapon did you use?

The funny thing is the death count in BUTTERFLY SWORDS is actually low compared to the other books I've written. Butterfly swords originated from the Shaolin temple and are meant to maim not kill. This might cause the book to lose a couple of Sherman tanks on the rating scale. (This was Courtney Milan's question, who seems to be taking a page from Mr. Milan.)

Is there a similar narrative in your next book? Or different here?

What if I told you there were no swordfights in the next book? :)

The sequel is still steeped in warfare and warrior culture, but where BUTTERFLY SWORDS is a sword fight adventure, THE DRAGON AND THE PEARL focuses on long held secrets and the underworld of the empire. My editor described it as "the same elements that made Butterfly Swords a strong submission, but very different."

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Since BUTTERFLY SWORDS is a romantic mash-up of Asian and Western heroic fiction, what are some of your favorite mash-ups? Jeannie is giving away an autographed copy of her debut novel along with a souvenir charm and collectible art card to one random commenter. I'll draw the winner at random next Sunday. Void where prohibited. Best of luck!

07 October 2010

Excerpt Thursday: Jeannie Lin

This week on Excerpt Thursday we're welcoming contributor Jeannie Lin as she celebrates the release of her debut, BUTTERFLY SWORDS, which is available now. BUTTERFLY SWORDS promises to take Harlequin Historical readers where they've never gone before: to 8th century China!

"If Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon merged with A Knight's Tale, you'd have the power and romance of Lin's dynamic debut. The action never stops, the love story is strong and the historical backdrop is fascinating." ★★★★ RT Book Reviews

Join us Sunday when Jeannie will be here to talk about her award-winning debut and give away a signed copy.

During China's infamous Tang Dynasty, a time awash with luxury, yet littered with deadly intrigues and fallen royalty, betrayed Princess Ai Li flees before her wedding. Miles from home, with only her delicate butterfly swords for a defense, she enlists the reluctant protection of a blue-eyed warrior...

Battle-scarred, embittered Ryam has always held his own life at cheap value. Ai Li's innocent trust in him and honorable, stubborn nature make him desperate to protect her--which means not seducing the first woman he has ever truly wanted....
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Set-up: Ryam and Ai Li are thrown together when he rushes into a throng of bandits to save her. This scene happens the day after, when they wake up in a secluded area of the woods.

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"I was...I was practicing."

"This is how you practice?"

He folded his arms over his chest and cocked his head as he circled her. The intensity of his gaze flooded her with heat. It was a wonder she didn't cut herself with her own swords.

"All those elaborate patterns," he murmured. "Does that help in fights?"

"In combat, your body falls into what it has done a thousand times before. A perfect harmony between instinct and thought."

Her throat felt dry as she recited the words. Her elder brothers were commonly praised for their skill, but never before had a man shown such interest in her. She drew out an intricate pattern with the tip of one sword in three neat swipes, as if wielding a calligraphy brush. It gave her something to do as he stepped closer. All of the air around her seemed to rush toward him whenever he drew near.

"Your brothers taught you this?" he asked.

"My grandmother."

His laughter filled the clearing. "Your grandmother?"

"Grandmother was a master."

The next pass of her sword sliced a scant inch in front of him, taunting him. He stood his ground and his smile widened.

"So do you want to try it?"

Her swords froze. "Try it?"

"My barbaric head bashing against that beautiful sword work of yours."

A duel. Her heart was already pounding with the promise of it.

"No," she replied.

"No?"

"You are far more experienced than I am."

The meaning had been clear in her head as she spoke the words, yet another, more suggestive meaning loomed between them. A well of heat rose up her neck. She blamed this barbarian language.

He placed a hand to his chest with mock passion. "But you got the better of me yesterday when I was drugged. Don't I deserve a chance to redeem myself?"

She was certain there was something not quite proper about a strange man offering to spar with her the day after they met. Yet this foreigner treated her with such directness and familiarity, like her brothers. He continued to taunt her with laughter shining in his eyes and the curve of his mouth hinted at an irresistible wickedness. Her stomach knotted in response.

In truth, not like her brothers at all.

"I should get some advantage since you are so..." She looked him up and down. "Big."

"What do you have in mind?"

With a household of five brothers she knew how to pick her battles. Ryam had more training than her and his sword could cut her in half, but its weight would slow him down. And the terms were yet to be negotiated. With a good plan, she could defeat Fourth Brother and occasionally, even Third brother.

"I attack first. Ten attempts. You can only defend," she proposed.

"You do this often, don't you?"

His irises shifted to storm gray, the laughter in them transforming into something dark and unknown. He held her gaze while the woods faded around her.

"What do you say to a wager?" He unsheathed his sword in a seductive whisper of steel. "If I win, you give me a kiss."

Barbaric. But she saw her opening.

"If I win, you take me to Changan."

He let her heart beat on forever before answering.

"Agreed."

Her palms began to sweat, and a fever rose beneath her skin. Up until then, she truly believed she could defeat him. She had been running strategies through her head, but suddenly she found herself staring at the rough stubble over his jaw and wondering if it would tickle. It was the sort of daydream that would send Grandmother's bamboo switch stinging over her knuckles. The sort of thought that would have Mother beseeching their ancestors to bring her back to sanity.

"After the first round--" She ran her tongue over her lips. For all her negotiation, she had the sinking feeling this duel had slipped out of her grasp. "If you do not defeat me after ten attempts, you should honorably forfeit."

"Of course. Twenty moves?" he asked softly.

Deep breaths, she reminded herself. Mind, breath, body. "Or first blood."

He raised his sword in salute. The smile remained on his face as he backed away, setting the starting distance.

19 October 2009

Research: Inspired by True Events

By Jeannie Lin

When a movie claims to be "based on true events", it's almost a joke now. It usually means there's a loose link to actual events at best. In historical fiction, it's common to have a basis in research and then play a little game of "What if?"

Research into ancient Chinese texts presents an interesting quandary. Historical accounts are so imbued with romanticism and legendary exaggerations that history and fable become blurred. The research for the "East meets West" elements of BUTTERFLY SWORDS took an interesting twist and surprisingly, had quite a bit of documentation behind them.

The first thread of inspiration came from comparative history. As history buffs, we tend to focus on one period or one area. But out of curiosity, I tried to match up one of my favorite eras, the late Tang dynasty, with western history and found an interesting correlation: the Golden Age of China coincides with the Dark Ages of Europe. The Dark Ages were a time of flux. Rome had fallen and an array of different barbarian tribes wandered into the lands once controlled by the Roman Empire. At the same time, China was at one of its heights of culture and learning. This was the heyday of Silk Road trade. It also happened to be a time when women enjoyed more freedom and several prominent females such as Empress Wu rose to the highest ranks of power.

The second thread of inspiration came from one of the barbarian tribes that challenged the Roman empire: The Huns. The Huns originated from the steppes of Eastern Asia but by the time they migrated to Europe, they had gathered a whole mix of cultures and ethnicities. Attila the Hun became embroiled in court politics when the Emperor's sister, Honoria, appealed to Attila to try to escape marriage to a Roman senator. Hmm...what if the barbarians went from the West to the East instead and their leader somehow got mixed up with an imperial princess of the Tang Dynasty?

Now that things were starting to stew, I had to figure out how much contact there actually was between the East and the West before Marco Polo. It turns out that there are records of early contact in the Han Dynasty(AD 25-220). The explorer, Gan Ying, was sent on an expedition to Rome. It's believed that he made it to the shore of the Mediterranean Ocean before turning back. His travels are documented in the Hou Hanshou, a historical account of the later Han Dynasty.

Direct contact between the two cultures was rare, but there are accounts of Roman ambassadors visiting the Chinese imperial court, sent by various Roman Emperors from the first through the third century.

To Rome, China was known as Seres. Chinese silk was brought to Rome through the Silk Road and Roman good were traded in China. A 4th century Chinese document, the Weilue, contains a section called the People of the West where the kingdoms of the Middle East, India and Rome are described. Rome was called "Da Qin" or "Ta Chin" which means Great China. This document indicates that at the very least, China was aware of Rome and curious about gathering information about the great empire that existed on the other side of the world.

So did western Europeans ever venture into China in the 8th century? Probably not. But was it possible? Maybe. More importantly, if they did, is that a story people would want to discover? I'm hoping so. All in all, it is hard, hard work "making up" any historical world, regardless of whether you are using actual historical figures or simply inspired by true events.