05 January 2012

Excerpt Thursday: A Storm Hits Valparaiso by David Gaughran



This week on Excerpt Thursday, we're welcoming best-selling author DavidGaughran, whose debut historical, A STORM HITS VALPARAISO, is set in South America during the 1800's. It's an epic story of the quest for freedom in colonial Argentina.  Join us Sunday, when David will be here to talk about the book and give away a digital copy. Here's the blurb:

In 1810, José de San Martín deserts the Spanish Army and returns home to Buenos Aires to lead a bloody revolt against his former masters. Struggling with an increasing dependence on opiates, San Martín forms a secret army of thieves, mercenaries, slaves, and prostitutes to free Argentina from the Spanish Empire.

A Storm Hits Valparaíso is an epic, 400-page historical adventure with a huge cast of characters whose stories gradually interweave, including: two brothers torn apart by love; a slave running for his life, a disgraced British sailor seeking redemption in a foreign land; an Indian trapped in the death mines of Potosí; and a Spanish general who deserts the army to raise the flag of rebellion against Madrid.

An Excerpt from A Storm Hits Valparaíso

Catalina Flores de la Peña’s tongue got her in more trouble than any other part of her body, even though there were far more likely candidates. However, as soon as anyone brought these to her attention, they realized why most men preferred to admire her from the dusty corners of her father’s tavern, rather than approach her directly. So legendary was her temper that the mayor ordered her father to keep her upstairs when dignitaries came to visit the tavern, fearing a repeat of the night she broke the magistrate’s nose.
When she was confined to her room, customers tended not to linger; there was no one to hasten the hours between the first pisco and the fall of night. Watching her glide between tables—flirting with one man, berating another, eyes flashing one moment, soft and kind the next—was one of the more pleasant ways to avoid thinking about the weather on Valparaíso’s long winter nights.
Her father—Don Flores—was a stern man and no one was quite sure of his first name. One customer swore his uncle grew up with Don Flores in Pucon, and that he was called Ignacio. Another insisted his brother once loitered outside the confessional and heard old Father Guido refer to Don Flores as Ricardo. Catalina’s father never let on, happy to give the men something to talk about other than his daughter. And anyway, the majority of his patrons were content simply calling him Don Flores, the honorific reflecting the distance he kept from them.
Don Flores’ low opinion of his fellow man resulted from years of seeing them at their worst, for he slept when he wasn’t working and he worked when he wasn’t sleeping. His daughter was spared this judgment. He showered her with all the love and affection he withheld from the rest of society. When Catalina was old enough, he insisted she work at the bar so that she would form the same useful opinion of humanity that protected and comforted him in equal measure.
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Catalina could feel his eyes—watching her. She tried to ignore him, but every time she looked, there he was. Most men had the decency to look away when she caught them, but this Spanish puerco just went on staring, with the faintest hint of a sneer at the corner of his lips.
Something about him kept her on edge. She tried to put him out of her mind; she had troubles enough tonight. The crew of the Esmeralda had descended on Valparaíso with no good in mind. Their ship had docked, needing repairs, and they were taking advantage of several days of unexpected shore leave before continuing on to Lima. It had been a long voyage from Spain. The sailors hadn’t seen port during the journey across the Atlantic, down the barren coast of Patagonia, past the frozen wastelands of Tierra del Fuego, and around Cape Horn into the Pacific. The Chilean rebels had no ships worthy of the name, and their forces had withdrawn on sight of the frigate; their one paltry cannon was no match for the Esmeralda’s forty-two guns. The Spaniards had secured the waterfront in under an hour, encountering no resistance. Sentries were posted at each street corner, and the sailors who escaped guard duty were determined to make the most of this opportunity.
Toward midnight, the bawdy crowd began to clear, following the musicians down the street, looking for whores and gambling tables. An hour later, only one table was left: Spanish sailors, drunk, shouting insults. Except for him; he just watched. She tried to shake it off, hoping they would be gone soon. Instead, they called for another drink.
“Very well, señores,” said Don Flores, as he poured the pisco, “one more, then we close.”
Catalina placed the drinks on the table, grateful the night was nearly over, already thinking of bed. As she turned to leave, the puerco grabbed her arm. “I hope you are not going to throw us out on the street just yet. It’s still early.”
Catalina glared at him. “Let go of me, puerco, or you’ll be out now.”
He pulled her down onto his lap, grabbing her breast. “Chica, the night’s only beginning—” He stopped short, her cold metal blade pressed against his throat. The bar fell silent—a silence quickly shattered by his companions jumping up from their chairs, upending the table in their haste. Catalina pulled the puerco’s head back, exposing his sweaty neck. One of the sailors edged closer. The tip of her dagger nicked the puerco’s skin, drawing a small bead of blood.
“Stand back lads,” he cautioned.
Catalina turned to his companions. “You two, leave.”
They paused. The puerco gave a slight nod, the knife still firmly at his neck. Eyes on Catalina, his companions staggered backward to the door and stepped outside. Her father hurried to her side and eased the knife from her fingers. With his other hand, he twisted the puerco’s arm up behind his back and marched him after his companions.
“You tell that bitch this isn’t finished.” The puerco struggled. “I’ll be back for her.”
Don Flores threw him out the door, bolting it shut. He sighed then looked at his daughter. “Go to bed mi hija. It has been a long night. Tomorrow we can clean.”
Catalina nodded and went upstairs.
The next morning, the air thick with stale sweat and tobacco, Catalina drummed her fingers on the bar as she surveyed the damage. This day isn’t going to improve in a hurry, she thought. Last night’s crowd had been rough. Aside from dirty glasses and plates, she had smashed bottles and broken chairs to contend with. At least her regulars knew the rules—and occasionally respected them—but those animals, they had no respect for anything. She cursed as a glass slipped from her hand and shattered. A groan came from the doorway outside. Pedro, she thought, a smile sailing through the storm of her face.
Every night, Pedro Villar fell asleep in the doorway of the bar with a flower in his hand, intending to profess his love to Catalina. Every night, his courage would falter, leaving him slumped outside, cursing his cowardice and mourning his solitude. Every morning, Catalina sent him home to his mother—a stern woman who put a raw egg in his coffee as punishment for his nightly excesses.
Catalina opened the door and shooed Pedro away with the broom, unmindful of the heart she broke a little more each day.
“Pedro Villar?” Her father appeared as she was re-locking the door.
Catalina laughed. “Who else?”
“He has too much interest in you for my liking.”
“That drunk would chase a burro in a dress.”
Her father grunted. “Catalina, put down that broom. I want to talk to you.”
“What is it, Papa?”
“I’m sending you to Santiago for a few days, to your aunt. I don’t want any argument. It’s not safe for you here.”
“But Papa, we can’t let—”
“Sergeant Eduardo came by last night, after you went to bed. He is worried about these sailors. They are hot-headed and foolish enough to do something stupid.” Don Flores took a bottle of pisco from the shelf, cleaning the label with his thumb before pouring himself a healthy measure. “He can’t protect us. His hands are tied. None of his men can enter Valparaíso while there is a Spanish warship in the bay.” He emptied the contents with one gulp. “He feels it would be best if you visited some relatives until the Spaniards leave town.”
“But this is my home.”
“I have made my decision, Catalina. Just for a few days, until these sailors leave.” He raised his hands, as if to brook any further discussion.
“Papa—”
“That’s enough!”
Catalina continued cleaning in silence. There was no point arguing; her father’s mind was made up. She had no siblings to share the burden of her father’s protectiveness, no mother to soften his resolve; she was going to Santiago.

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5 comments:

J. R. Tomlin said...

Looks interesting. I love historicals that are in unusual settings like this. Going on my TBR list.

David Gaughran said...

Thanks JR! I hope you enjoy it. I downloaded Freedom's Sword recently. Looking forward to it.

Iain Mavro Coggins said...

I too am a South America afficionado, as well as a lover of S.A. lit. I have reviewed A Storm Hits Valparaiso online and I am very much intrigued! I am wondering how much influence, if any, Joseph Conrad's Nostromo had on your structuring of the novel? He was an outsider, as well as a Victorian Englishman, with all the prejudices that implies toward Latin culture at the time. Nevertheless, Nostromo has that epic, romantic, multi-character sweep that your book also appears to have. Cheers on completing it! I can't wait to read it myself!

iainmavrocoggins said...

I too am a South America afficionado, as well as a lover of S.A. lit. I have reviewed A Storm Hits Valparaiso online and I am very much intrigued! I am wondering how much influence, if any, Joseph Conrad's Nostromo had on your structuring of the novel? He was an outsider, as well as a Victorian Englishman, with all the prejudices that implies toward Latin culture at the time. Nevertheless, Nostromo has that epic, romantic, multi-character sweep that your book also appears to have. Cheers on completing it! I can't wait to read it myself!

David Gaughran said...

Hi Iain,

Sorry I missed your comment. A few people now have made that Nostromo link now, which is interesting. I really must read it now!

Dave